Monday, May 14, 2007

EARLY BIRD WRITING, MAY 14,16


THREE PLACES I LIKE (PARAGRAPH)

Near Hansung University there are three places I like to go to (topic sentence). The first place is the Naksan Park (1st subtopic). The park has great trails for jogging as well as exercise machines. It also has many beautiful trees and flowers. The view of Downtown Seoul from is quite amazing. The second place is a little variety store neary (2nd subtopic). I can find many cheap and good products there, such as kitchen utensils, cosmetics, stationary, and the like. The store is also very close to my house so I don't have to carry heavy objects too far. The third place is Hanaro restaurant (3rd subtopic). It is very cozy and clean. The wait staff is friendly. They have the best tubu kimchi in the neighbourhood. I am lucky to live close to Hansung University because if I want to exercise, buy something or eat good food, I don¡'t have to go too far away from home – it's all right here (conclusive sentence).

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