ECW, Week of Nov. 19/20
The purpose of introduction is to make the topic and main ideas of the essay clear to the reader.
How to Reduce Stress - Sample, Student Writing
[intro] Once I quit a job, and my stress was almost gone. This might be the best for reducing stress, but nobody can choose it, unless they can afford to. However, there are some suggestions which can help you reduce your stress. Travelling, gardening, and baking are good ways to reduce stress.
Travelling is an effective way to reduce any kind of stress. Planning the trip gives people an exciting mood that inspires them to be active. By escaping from pressure, their mind will be refreshed and positive. Therefore, by travelling, people will gain great energy to control their stressful lives.
Gardening is another favourable way of treating stress, because it protects people from mental and physical problems. As people know, flowers and their scents have wonderful effects that give people a peaceful and cheerful feeling. Likewise, gardening in the sunshine strengthens their bodies to resist the stresses. For these reasons, gardening is a valuable way to avoid stress.
If people have stress outside, baking at home is a great protection. Kneading bread dough is especially effective in controlling their temper. By touching dough, the smoothness and softness of the dough can heal their depression or stress. Because the baking is homemade, their worries will be reduced and thus is worthwhile for stressed people.
[conclusion] Spending time for holidays, garden work, home baking is a reliable way to help people to value their existence. In this generation, people have excessive information that makes them confused and mislead. For reducing a stressful life, people should with the simple ways that are all around them.
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HOMEWORK
1. Imagine there will be an essay about your or your life. Make an outline that will only have outlines of the body paragraphs II, II, IV but not I and V. For more guidelines, check activity 8, page 70, your textbooks. Your outline should include three main ideas. Each main idea should have three supporting ideas (A, B, C), and each supporting idea should have 1 - 3 supporting points (1,2,3).
How to Reduce Stress - Sample, Student Writing
[intro] Once I quit a job, and my stress was almost gone. This might be the best for reducing stress, but nobody can choose it, unless they can afford to. However, there are some suggestions which can help you reduce your stress. Travelling, gardening, and baking are good ways to reduce stress.
Travelling is an effective way to reduce any kind of stress. Planning the trip gives people an exciting mood that inspires them to be active. By escaping from pressure, their mind will be refreshed and positive. Therefore, by travelling, people will gain great energy to control their stressful lives.
Gardening is another favourable way of treating stress, because it protects people from mental and physical problems. As people know, flowers and their scents have wonderful effects that give people a peaceful and cheerful feeling. Likewise, gardening in the sunshine strengthens their bodies to resist the stresses. For these reasons, gardening is a valuable way to avoid stress.
If people have stress outside, baking at home is a great protection. Kneading bread dough is especially effective in controlling their temper. By touching dough, the smoothness and softness of the dough can heal their depression or stress. Because the baking is homemade, their worries will be reduced and thus is worthwhile for stressed people.
[conclusion] Spending time for holidays, garden work, home baking is a reliable way to help people to value their existence. In this generation, people have excessive information that makes them confused and mislead. For reducing a stressful life, people should with the simple ways that are all around them.
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HOMEWORK
1. Imagine there will be an essay about your or your life. Make an outline that will only have outlines of the body paragraphs II, II, IV but not I and V. For more guidelines, check activity 8, page 70, your textbooks. Your outline should include three main ideas. Each main idea should have three supporting ideas (A, B, C), and each supporting idea should have 1 - 3 supporting points (1,2,3).
2. Write an outline for the essay on page 99/100 in your textbooks.
NO JOURNAL!
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